Thursday 1 June 2017

Check out our moments in time at the swimming pool!

Snaphot Of Swimming
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  1. Room 6 1 June 2017 at 20:54

    What beautiful descriptive language you have used to describe your swimming experience. I have enjoyed reading them all! The strong verbs you have used really help me to picture each of you in my mind. Fabulous art work too.
    From Mrs Kitto

    Saul - I love how you ended your writing with a metaphor "I'm a piece of seaweed, floating on the water". Very clever.
    Meisha - I love the image I can see of you "swinging your bag over your shoulder and striding out of the changing room". Great choice of language.

    From Mum

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  2. Room 6 1 June 2017 at 20:55

    What beautiful descriptive language you have used to describe your swimming experience. I have enjoyed reading them all! The strong verbs you have used really help me to picture each of you in my mind. Fabulous art work too.
    From Mrs Kitto

    Saul - I love how you ended your writing with a metaphor "I'm a piece of seaweed, floating on the water". Very clever.
    Meisha - I love the image I can see of you "swinging your bag over your shoulder and striding out of the changing room". Great choice of language.

    From Mum

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