tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8346408524420660351.post4580203990603237753..comments2023-05-27T23:53:55.523+12:00Comments on Small Steps 2020: Check out our moments in time at the swimming pool!Room 7 ROCKERS!!!!!http://www.blogger.com/profile/12794846448207988623noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8346408524420660351.post-50338699795551814912017-06-01T20:55:27.580+12:002017-06-01T20:55:27.580+12:00What beautiful descriptive language you have used ...What beautiful descriptive language you have used to describe your swimming experience. I have enjoyed reading them all! The strong verbs you have used really help me to picture each of you in my mind. Fabulous art work too.<br />From Mrs Kitto<br /><br />Saul - I love how you ended your writing with a metaphor "I'm a piece of seaweed, floating on the water". Very clever.<br />Meisha - I love the image I can see of you "swinging your bag over your shoulder and striding out of the changing room". Great choice of language. <br /><br />From MumRoom 6 https://www.blogger.com/profile/10976723391696265792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8346408524420660351.post-74783673740835884722017-06-01T20:54:32.993+12:002017-06-01T20:54:32.993+12:00What beautiful descriptive language you have used ...What beautiful descriptive language you have used to describe your swimming experience. I have enjoyed reading them all! The strong verbs you have used really help me to picture each of you in my mind. Fabulous art work too.<br />From Mrs Kitto<br /><br />Saul - I love how you ended your writing with a metaphor "I'm a piece of seaweed, floating on the water". Very clever.<br />Meisha - I love the image I can see of you "swinging your bag over your shoulder and striding out of the changing room". Great choice of language. <br /><br />From MumRoom 6 https://www.blogger.com/profile/10976723391696265792noreply@blogger.com