Let's celebrate with Megan sharing her piece of writing today, it's based from a short video clip of a girl in a clock tower.
Here is the video
Welcome to Clyde Primary, My class is called Tui and we are currently using Seesaw for all our learning and for parents to access.
HI Megan I think your writing about the clock tower is so cool. from Amelie
ReplyDeleteThank you for coming over to the Kea room and sharing your writing with me today Megan. What a fabulous job you have done adding strong adjectives and verbs to make your writing more interesting. Great job with the metaphors you have used! Well done.
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to megan I loved hearing your wonderful writing great job from Olivia russel
ReplyDeleteWell done Megan, now I know how to get into your blog will check it frequently. Keep up the good work, from Nana & Grandad, Timaru
ReplyDeleteIh Megan I loved your stroing verbs and writing
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Hi Megan! I love your writing. you spoke very clearly reading your story. I love your adjectives and verbs! Also your metaphors. I love the sentance, my dress had a kitten softness, I looked up at the elephant grey clocktower, and, the balloon was a butterfly elegance. It made your writing so interesting! from Hannah
ReplyDeleteWOW Megan I just loved your story it"s just ahh I can't even find words for it I love your powerful words you put in I love it I just can"t stop saying that it just wow Megan from Portia.
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