Tuesday 10 November 2015

Some wonderful examples of writing from just a few of my super duper kiddies!!

Zipping cheetahs hurtling down the dusty plain when they they spotted a black wild boar so they pounced on it devouring it until there was only a dry bone. 

My beautiful colourful butterfly flies as gracefully as a feather dropping to the ground with her dazzling colours that are bright and bold.

Zipping across the dusty sandy plain the hungry cheetah wanted to catch the deer so he sprinted as fast as a strip of lightening! CRUNCH!

Olivia  Hannah
One frozen night a mother lion crept back into her cave with a dead zebra in her huge jaws. She had been out hunting for quite a while, hunting for food to share with her hungry cubs so she dropped it onto the dusty ground. Her three cubs feasted on the delicious dead zebra, then they lay down and fell into a deep sleep. The mother licked off the meat the cubs hadn't chomped to the bone and scoffed it down!


  1. great adjativs and vearb from Luke

  2. Hi Hannah and Olivia grate adjatives .

  3. Awsome adjectives and verbs Olivia from Tahlia N

  4. Hi room7 love it niko luke . from Tahlia c

  5. Hi guys I love the verbs you used. They are awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! from olivia L